It’s funny how I was initially thrown for a loop in the first few dialogues because I was expecting a girl love story… And it was of course !
I loved it. How “unconventional” the coolness/kindness of the cast was, especially Lucia - but the whole cast was highly huggable :3
Looking forward for more ! o/
If I had one critic to make is how the dragon-girl felt too bright for a ~500y old overpowered being. She hides her trauma’s so well it’s hard to tell she must have seen a lot of cherished ones come and go - or got bored doing most things. The “usual” tragedies of immortals ? I guess part of me needed a reason as to why she feels so “light-hearted” about life instead of. …Being bored or unattached (or guarded against attachment). I don’t know if I make sense >_<
Her best friend is an ace succubus. An interesting concept! Their platonic relationship is sooo cute. I love the dynamic between the two characters
The art style and world-building are great. I felt immersed in this world and am curious about many parts of it that we didn't get to see in the game.
Throughout the course of the story, I went through happiness, sadness, hope and anger.
Finally, this game is about being transgender. This is why I decided to play it and I wasn't disappointed, as it made me think about myself and other queer people I know.
In the end, the journey is only starting, and I am eager to find out where it will lead Dawn. I hope everything will turn out good for her <3
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA I FRICKING LOVED THIS SO FRICKING MUCH AAAAAAAAAAAAAA. The whole story is quite the journey, with some rather harsh lows but some extremely fantastic highs, and the ultimate conclusion is also quite satisfying. Especially, especially loved nearly every instance of Lucia just being sweet as fricking hell, and EXTREMELY ESPECIALLY, ESPECIALLY LOVED THE LAST CG SCENE AAAAAAA. Stuff like that is simply perfect. It's so perfect. I'm so happy for these platonic/possibly-queerplatonic besties.
All of the worldbuilding with the magiis and quirks with succubii specifically was EXTREMELY interesting to experience, and frankly goddhgfhgfhdgfdghdf I love Lucia so much. I love an ace succubii so much. That's simply the greatest kind of succubii. Especially helps that she's kind of an asshole at times; makes her sweeter moments all the freaking more powerful. But I mean Dawn and Vulcan are really excellent too; OBVIOUSLY THIS STORY IS MORE ABOUT DAWN THAN LUCIA I SUPPOSE AND I REALLY REALLY DID ENJOY THE TRANSGENDER EXPERIENCE WRITING, EVEN THE HARSHER MOMENTS; VULCAN IS ALSO JUST SO SWEET AND INTERESTING AND I LOVE HER. But like. Lucia. Lucia, y'know?? She's perfect. I mean the other two are perfect too but sometimes you do have to make a favorite. I guess that's mostly because of her relationship with Dawn, so thank you Dawn for making Lucia perfect, I suppose!!!! Although something gay as fuck is often very, very nice to see, I am admittedly the biggest fan of close platonic/queerplatonic relationships like what's going on here.... Aro/ace life, I suppose, pff.
I saw there's a possible sequel in the works for this, and I dunno how long that'll take to get done, but..... GAAAAAH THIS WAS SO GOOD AAAAAAA THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT!!! BEST OF LUCK WITH EVERYTHING IN MAKING THE SEQUEL; HOPE IT'S FUN AS HECK TO MAKE!!!! And, DOUBLE EMPHASIS, THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!!!
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Looks great! It was a pleasure to be in the Queer Halloween Stories Bundle with you!
It’s funny how I was initially thrown for a loop in the first few dialogues because I was expecting a girl love story… And it was of course !
I loved it. How “unconventional” the coolness/kindness of the cast was, especially Lucia - but the whole cast was highly huggable :3
Looking forward for more ! o/ If I had one critic to make is how the dragon-girl felt too bright for a ~500y old overpowered being. She hides her trauma’s so well it’s hard to tell she must have seen a lot of cherished ones come and go - or got bored doing most things. The “usual” tragedies of immortals ? I guess part of me needed a reason as to why she feels so “light-hearted” about life instead of. …Being bored or unattached (or guarded against attachment). I don’t know if I make sense >_<
Thank you for your kind comment <3
Vulcan's character will be further explored in the future :>
I really liked this visual novel.
The main character is very kind and sweet.
Her best friend is an ace succubus. An interesting concept! Their platonic relationship is sooo cute. I love the dynamic between the two characters
The art style and world-building are great. I felt immersed in this world and am curious about many parts of it that we didn't get to see in the game.
Throughout the course of the story, I went through happiness, sadness, hope and anger.
Finally, this game is about being transgender. This is why I decided to play it and I wasn't disappointed, as it made me think about myself and other queer people I know.
In the end, the journey is only starting, and I am eager to find out where it will lead Dawn. I hope everything will turn out good for her <3
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA I FRICKING LOVED THIS SO FRICKING MUCH AAAAAAAAAAAAAA. The whole story is quite the journey, with some rather harsh lows but some extremely fantastic highs, and the ultimate conclusion is also quite satisfying. Especially, especially loved nearly every instance of Lucia just being sweet as fricking hell, and EXTREMELY ESPECIALLY, ESPECIALLY LOVED THE LAST CG SCENE AAAAAAA. Stuff like that is simply perfect. It's so perfect. I'm so happy for these platonic/possibly-queerplatonic besties.
All of the worldbuilding with the magiis and quirks with succubii specifically was EXTREMELY interesting to experience, and frankly goddhgfhgfhdgfdghdf I love Lucia so much. I love an ace succubii so much. That's simply the greatest kind of succubii. Especially helps that she's kind of an asshole at times; makes her sweeter moments all the freaking more powerful. But I mean Dawn and Vulcan are really excellent too; OBVIOUSLY THIS STORY IS MORE ABOUT DAWN THAN LUCIA I SUPPOSE AND I REALLY REALLY DID ENJOY THE TRANSGENDER EXPERIENCE WRITING, EVEN THE HARSHER MOMENTS; VULCAN IS ALSO JUST SO SWEET AND INTERESTING AND I LOVE HER. But like. Lucia. Lucia, y'know?? She's perfect. I mean the other two are perfect too but sometimes you do have to make a favorite. I guess that's mostly because of her relationship with Dawn, so thank you Dawn for making Lucia perfect, I suppose!!!! Although something gay as fuck is often very, very nice to see, I am admittedly the biggest fan of close platonic/queerplatonic relationships like what's going on here.... Aro/ace life, I suppose, pff.
I saw there's a possible sequel in the works for this, and I dunno how long that'll take to get done, but..... GAAAAAH THIS WAS SO GOOD AAAAAAA THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT!!! BEST OF LUCK WITH EVERYTHING IN MAKING THE SEQUEL; HOPE IT'S FUN AS HECK TO MAKE!!!! And, DOUBLE EMPHASIS, THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!!!
Hey there, thank you for such an enthusiastic comment that went right through my heart!
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I can't make any announcement yet, but I can say with confidence that Dawn's journey isn't over!
Very cute art and a story with fun nuances and turns in a game that's quite concise!